Trying to be a bit different from previous posts, an exclamation mark has been left off the post title. I seem to have been channeling Matthew Reilly, and trying to make every post seem terribly exciting with their frequent appearance =P
Stuck in Scene 2 of Chapter 1, and trying to make a freeflowing description of the day-to-day activities of the population seems more difficult that one would think. Especially when one is trying to be respectful to a way of life very different than their own.
Beginning to think that maybe I should aim to 3 pages per scene at the moment. Doing more than that seems to be padding it, and working against keeping the brisk pace going.
1206AM… yeesh. But, version 2 of book 1 chapter 1 scene 2 completed. The fight scene I thought to place as scene 3 will now definitely be scene 4. Best use scene 3 to get an insight into the workings of a Private Council, to help transition/escalate to the public version in scene 4.